studious samus

that isn't very surprising though. If you want to take such a simplistic route you would have to add more to it... just randomly saying that could or could not ...

very true. Personally, I find it annoying to have to spend quanities of time with idiots :p it is very hard to be intelligent and social at the same time ...

I like it. Everything Sophie said was good ^^ except i like repetition. Easy to remember, hard to stop thinking about. It is nice though when you always have a ...

This is defiantly not the best I have written but I don’t expect it to be. I wrote this on the way back from school lol. Critique the heck out ...

i like it. "Would you think of me late at night would you mind if I invaded your dreams would it be bad would you be glad " i think ...

This is a parody of the death of cookie monster, and the polices report on it. In no way is any of this true or does it represent Sesame Street ...

man i love a good story like this! these days there just are to many happily ever afters. Gota love a good ol villain wins sometimes :]. The only mistake ...

very good. i love the line "But affection can quickly spoil when it isn’t refrigerated." I busted out laughing [in a good way]. So true but to me such a ...

ello ms. Chera very compelling story! the very sentence was enough to draw me in, enough to make me wonder. and you described the area beautifully if a little bit ...

Short stories are good, but i notice a lot of them end up being series with like 50 books in them. i love them but i notice there usually ends ...

dang. i have spent countless hours on paint trying to make simple designs and failing terribly -.- but this... this is downright amazing. I know that even if i spent ...

I CLAIM THIS SPOT, IN THE NAME OF MEHSELF! >:O BWAHAHAHA! anywhose... i used to write all the time. i would write poetry, short stories and series of books that ...

i like it! so true But i was and still am a little confused on a line. "Not now there are no people" double negative? maybe add a comma or ...

very nice. i agree with the earlier posts, with the need to capitalize God at the end since you did before, and maybe you should expound on the idea of ...

very good. i especially like how you have described the girl, and well... pretty much everything o.O it is specific enough that i can visualize it in my head, yet ...